Sunday, January 29, 2012

Strokes


The painter's hands once caressed the sky in electric blues,
now the canvas portrays angry jabs of half-hearted hues-
a spoke of wheels and broken dreams,
short circuit bursts of silent screams.
What do you see, mother, what are you trying to say?
 Words tumble and betray, but eyes of liquid, you do convey-
the painter of pastels is denied access to who she used to be,
she now lives among strangers bonded to the same destiny.
In silence we sit, hold hands, and lose the day
heart's illusions of matter are now painted in gray. 




*Magpie Tales, 102 

36 comments:

anthonynorth said...

This was profound. Truly from the heart.

susan m hinckley said...

There were some lines in this I loved, as well as the photo at the end. And the title...yeah, let's just say I loved it all.

Kay said...

beautiful on every level, loved it..x

thingy said...

Thanks, Anthony. : )

thingy said...

How kind. Thank-you, Susan.

thingy said...

Hi, Kay. Thanks, so much. : )

Taylor Boomer said...

well described story,
love the imagery.

Kathe W. said...

You show your love through these words and the added image.

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

Very good take! Lovin' it!..

JJRod'z

Susie Clevenger said...

Such beauty mixed with pain...reminds me of my mother who had Alzheimer's...I would sit with her as she was lost in the past.

ex-ferrer said...

HILARIOUS! Just kidding! ;)
Very well done!

thingy said...

Thanks, all. : )

thingy said...

You arse. LOL.

Tom said...

great

Laurie Kolp said...

How sad... but beautiful still the same.

http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/01/chilling-out

JC said...

Very wonderfully done!

Brian Miller said...

oh man heavy with feeling this one...the painter no longer able to access the paints...that stills me just a bit...and great accompanying pic of your own...

Wander said...

This speaks of heart break just on a life size scale!
Wander

Grammy said...

Excellent, I love how original and full of power this is. :)

thingy said...

Thank-you all, for the kind words. : )

DCW said...

Something abstract made so real . . . well done

booguloo said...

Such a sad tale; one I am familiar with Thanks for sharing.

Sue said...

Great title for this piece.

=)

thingy said...

Your comments are much appreciated. Thanks, all. : )

Lolamouse said...

Wow. This was felt deeply. From the title to the words to the pictures. Well done.

Tumblewords: said...

So poignant - it stops my breath...

Nicholas V. said...

Well written and heart-felt.

HyperCRYPTICal said...

You are describing something I know very well Thingy - a sad portrayal of something very real. Bravo.

Anna :o]

thingy said...

Morning, all. Thanks so much. : )

Doctor FTSE said...

So well constructed and with a real message. Great Magpie!

Isabel Doyle said...

Congratulations on such a fine response to the prompt - different strokes indeed

thingy said...

Thanks, Doctor. : )

Thank-you so much, Isabel. : )

Helena said...

Oh, my! You've made me quite emotional with this read. Beautifully done, of course. I helped look after my mum-in-law for 25 years after her stroke. The poem speaks of her in her last few years of life. So profound, Thingy.....x

thingy said...

I have the deepest respect for anyone who has been a caregiver for a family member.

Thanks, Lena. : )

Trellissimo said...

Excellent Mag with a profound message.

ds said...

A terrifying state to be in, "denied access to who you used to be." You treat this with sensitivity, grace, and respect. Lovely and deeply moving. Thank you.