The painter's hands once caressed the sky in electric blues,
now the canvas portrays angry jabs of half-hearted hues-
a spoke of wheels and broken dreams,
short circuit bursts of silent screams.
What do you see, mother, what are you trying to say?
Words tumble and betray, but eyes of liquid, you do convey-
the painter of pastels is denied access to who she used to be,
she now lives among strangers bonded to the same destiny.
In silence we sit, hold hands, and lose the day
heart's illusions of matter are now painted in gray.
*Magpie Tales, 102


36 comments:
This was profound. Truly from the heart.
There were some lines in this I loved, as well as the photo at the end. And the title...yeah, let's just say I loved it all.
beautiful on every level, loved it..x
Thanks, Anthony. : )
How kind. Thank-you, Susan.
Hi, Kay. Thanks, so much. : )
well described story,
love the imagery.
You show your love through these words and the added image.
Very good take! Lovin' it!..
JJRod'z
Such beauty mixed with pain...reminds me of my mother who had Alzheimer's...I would sit with her as she was lost in the past.
HILARIOUS! Just kidding! ;)
Very well done!
Thanks, all. : )
You arse. LOL.
great
How sad... but beautiful still the same.
http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2012/01/chilling-out
Very wonderfully done!
oh man heavy with feeling this one...the painter no longer able to access the paints...that stills me just a bit...and great accompanying pic of your own...
This speaks of heart break just on a life size scale!
Wander
Excellent, I love how original and full of power this is. :)
Thank-you all, for the kind words. : )
Something abstract made so real . . . well done
Such a sad tale; one I am familiar with Thanks for sharing.
Great title for this piece.
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Your comments are much appreciated. Thanks, all. : )
Wow. This was felt deeply. From the title to the words to the pictures. Well done.
So poignant - it stops my breath...
Well written and heart-felt.
You are describing something I know very well Thingy - a sad portrayal of something very real. Bravo.
Anna :o]
Morning, all. Thanks so much. : )
So well constructed and with a real message. Great Magpie!
Congratulations on such a fine response to the prompt - different strokes indeed
Thanks, Doctor. : )
Thank-you so much, Isabel. : )
Oh, my! You've made me quite emotional with this read. Beautifully done, of course. I helped look after my mum-in-law for 25 years after her stroke. The poem speaks of her in her last few years of life. So profound, Thingy.....x
I have the deepest respect for anyone who has been a caregiver for a family member.
Thanks, Lena. : )
Excellent Mag with a profound message.
A terrifying state to be in, "denied access to who you used to be." You treat this with sensitivity, grace, and respect. Lovely and deeply moving. Thank you.
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